My Nan's Hands

This week's writing a free-verse poem task about my" 

Nan's hands". We practised using semi-colons, a range of a sentence lengths and using better vocabulary. Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell.I chose to write about my Nan because she is so special to me.

I love to spend more time with her she so strong

My Nan's hands 

are soft as a cute fluffy bunny;

her back is, sore as a broken bone :(

her legs, are tattooed(tattoos mean love,strength)

Her laugh is the joy to my heart ;

her voice, is alive to me.

posing,smiling so pride she the best 

snapchat picture person ever 

My Nan and dad

 

Moment of awesome

Intro:

The most awesome moment in my life is spending time with all my 

family because some people don't get to spend time with there

family because they might be busy or be at a friends house

 or on a holiday so my most of awesome moment is spending time 

with my family.

The awesome time I spent with my family. Some of my family 

went to rainbow's end it was like a dream so we went on 

lots of ride until it was time to close down rainbow's end but anyway

I was so happy that I was tall enough extreme stratosphere 

It was like a joke but it wasn't a joke so I went on it with my auntie

and uncle and my uncle's friends it was like heaven I loved it.

several of my family went on go carts a bit to many time,we also

went on the fear fall a few hours go bye.

Later on we finally had to go home I was 

exhausted.

😅

 

About me 2021 update

Hola,My name is Renei I am a year 7 and I go to ruapotaka school my teacher is Mr Nevalagi.I am Maori,in my family I am the second oldest out of all my siblings.I have 2 little brothers.one brother is 5 the other one 9 is and my big brother is 16 I also have 1 little sister she is 10.I like to play minecraft,roblox,fortnite with friends because minecraft when you're playing it means your being creative fortnite means  never leave a soldier behind.I really like to play with my friends because its just fun to play even if you're on a call playing with your friends.I play soccer because its a fun sport to play and volleyball I like to dig its interesting to play against other schools in tournaments. 

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