Intro:
The most awesome moment in my life is spending time with all my
family because some people don't get to spend time with there
family because they might be busy or be at a friends house
or on a holiday so my most of awesome moment is spending time
with my family.
The awesome time I spent with my family. Some of my family
went to rainbow's end it was like a dream so we went on
lots of ride until it was time to close down rainbow's end but anyway
I was so happy that I was tall enough extreme stratosphere
It was like a joke but it wasn't a joke so I went on it with my auntie
and uncle and my uncle's friends it was like heaven I loved it.
several of my family went on go carts a bit to many time,we also
went on the fear fall a few hours go bye.
Later on we finally had to go home I was
exhausted.
😅
Kia ora Renei
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Moment of Awesome. It's clear that you enjoy your time with family and hanging out at Rainbows End.
You had a lot of cool things happening in your "dream", a lot of action. Good to see you using paragraphs as well.
Keep trying your best to edit your posts for accurate punctuation, especially full stops and sentence types (simple, compound, complex).
Keep your Moments of Awesome coming!
Regards
Mr N