Tuesday, December 15, 2020

Day 2: Week 1: Comments

 



This is was my first comment.

I thought my comment was good because i introduced myself and because i connected 

my work to Tilly's  and I also said what school I was from and I related my work to Tilly's

work. I also asked a question.  

1 comment:

  1. Hey Renei,

    I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.

    Good Job one your comment on Tilly’s blog. It was short but you clearly introduced yourself, related to her work and gave them a bit of feedback and encouraged them to do better next time.

    Maybe you could give them a specific example of something they could try differently or add to make their work better next time. When we do this in a kind, caring way it helps them learn and improve. It takes a bit of practice to do this while still being positive and encouraging but it’s worth it to help others improve.

    Good work Renei,
    See you later in the comments.

    Daniel

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